---What is the Wing Dress?---
The wing dress is an ongoing project of mine
that I have been recording the 'making' process of since May '07.
The dress will have a wing/ feathers, dyed/ painted on it.
I am simultaneously making a shirt, also with a dyed wing.
on
my last post i was trying to
capture a sense of "velocity" as i've
placed feathers on the paper-form of the dress
now the task is almost done here and
today, i am going to show you
an equally boring-to-you (as the last few posts) process of
deciding on last bit of details that can make or break the design
circled are the challenging-to-me areas

below:
at first, i was thinking i may add another feather here
to further emphasize the "velocity" but
either one didn't seem right...
i opted not to in the end, though
that would make it look less like a real wing
you see,
some part of me will always be wanting to make rational sense
balancing, smoothing, harmonizing things out and such
avoiding that sneaky impulse is part of the challenge

now onto the shoulder area
something seems very very...off

added another feather on the sleeve and
sent it even further down the "off" path

this is something i avoid usually
to connect the pattern at the seam
just doesn't seem to work...

hmmm...the shaft of the bottom feather on chest
looks too straight, it doesn't flow

erased the "straight"
need just a little more of something...

last details on small areas like these are important
one little extra something could turn
"too few" into "too much" and
with my kind of designs it could
change the whole vibe into "tacky"
below:
added a half-hidden feather on chest
and decided to leave it this way
with "not quite enough" look

below:
this one feather on back
stood out like it's drawn with neon

i liked the shape of the feather so i
traced and moved it about a bit
an off-line graphic trick

the finished paper dress is
to be posted the next time
my apology for a dull post but
it will make a lot of sense when
the dress is done, really
thanks for reading!
(are yu still there?)
(((smiles)))